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32 BBY

Lucrehulk-Class Cargo Freighter GPA-LH-099397823065269845 "Amanoa"
Crew: 100 Humans, 10,000 Droids
Guests: 1
Cargo: 3,000,000 Metric Tons of Glitterstim Spice
Course: Hyperspace Transit from Kessel to Muunilinst

The panoramic window of the guest quarters at the front end of the freighter's core module provided Halna Gowen with an amazing view of the glowing blue tunnel of hyperspace, as well as the inside of the c-shaped cargo ring in which the spice was stored. Halna had seen the tunnel many times before, but he wasn't interested in the view; this was his first time alone. His parents were nobles from Celanon; his father Argo was the head of Gowen Planetary Advancement, a sub-company of the Trade Federation that provided planets that had start-up space societies with technology and the means to join galactic society and get representation in the Republic, and Callista, Halna's mother, was the senator for Celanon in the Galactic Senate. Despite being the head of the company, Argo made monthly trips to client worlds of GPA, and brought his family with him. This trip was different, as Halna was under the supervision of Captain Bonteri, who worked for GPA and named his ship after the ancient queen of his homeworld, Onderon. Argo and Callista had been summoned to a confidential meeting with other high-ranking officials of the Trade Federation, and Halna was only 10 years old. Because the meeting coincided with their monthly trip off Celanon, Argo didn't want to leave Halna at home. So he assigned Captain Bonteri to take Halna under his wing, if only for a week or 2, in preparation for his future career in GPA. Halna wasn't too happy about the arrangement; they were originally set to go to Ando, a tropical world. Instead, he had to spend 5 days on the dusty, boring world of Kessel. He was now on his way home, but they had to make a stop at Muunilinst to unload the spice; the only thing to go right for Halna on this trip; Proddo Tonith, his first long-distance friend, lived on Muunilinst; maybe Halna would finally get to meet him. He and proddo were watching the Boonta-Eve podrace live on the Holonet. Halna loved podraces, but hardly got to watch them; his parents didn't like Jabba the Hutt, the sponsor of the annual race on Tatooine. They would always dispute who would win this year; Proddo was just like any other Muun; shrewd and calculating. Because of this, he always supported Sebulba, the racer who won every year for the past 3 in a row, while Halna picked a new racer every year. This year, Halna picked a local human named Anakin Skywalker; a kid around Halna's age. "Are you kidding? That kid doesn't stand a chance. I mean, he's only 9 years old." Proddo chastised. Halna weathered the rebuke. "But he's already in second place, and catching up. Besides, Sebulba has to lose sometime." Halna said. "Just watch; he'll crash, and Sebulba will win again." Proddo responded with confidence. "You're like a droid Proddo, you know that?" Proddo chuckled lightly, "I'll take that as a compliment." "... and Sebulba's pod is going out of control! That is the first time he crashed. And Anakin takes the lead!" the Troig's right head announced. "What?!" both human and muun exclaimed with shock; Anakin won the podrace, and became the first human to do so. As both of them were disputing what was going on, a copper-plated protocol droid entered the room. "Master Gowen?" "What is it Seetoo?" Halna asked. C2-M3 responded, "We are 5 minutes away from Muunilinst; Captain Bonteri wants to see you on the bridge." Halna was slightly dismayed, "Okay, I'll be there in a few seconds." (to Proddo) "I gotta go, we're arriving at Muunilist." Halna, like all humans, said the name with the last n silent. "It's alright." Proddo responded. "I gotta go to; apparently, my family is welcoming a guest; a captain in GPA who's delivering spice." Halna's eyes widened. "That's the ship I'm on!" Proddo's eyes widened too, "Oh my stars! Well, see you soon."


Captain Bonteri sat expectantly in his command chair. "We'll be dropping out of hyperspace in 20 seconds Captain." a droid reported. At that moment, Bonteri's guest, Halna Gowen, came running onto the bridge. "Hey kid. We're dropping out right... now!" The tunnel straight ahead transformed into the lines of shortening stars as a planet seemed to jump out right in front of them. Bonteri pointed out the space station in the distance. "See that?" he asked Halna, who strained to recognize it. "That's the financial funnel, right?" he asked. "Yep. Administrator Tonith is waiting. Droid, is the shuttle ready?" "Yes sir." the droid responded. Bonteri looked to Halna. "Come on kid; we've got to take a shuttle to the station." Together they walked down to the hangar. They boarded the ship, a Haor-Chall made Sheathipede Transport, which whisked them to the ornate space station. Waiting in the station's hangar was an entourage of Muuns dressed in typical business wear, and a squad of Iotran guardsmen. The transport turned around as it entered the hangar to present it's boarding ramp. Bonteri and Halna exited. The lead Muun and two others walked up to them "Welcome to Muunilinst Captain Bonteri; how was the trip?" the adult Muun asked. "As successful as ever; we have the shipment." Bonteri responded. The Muun nodded in approval, "Good... and who's this?" he asked, referring to Halna. "Oh sorry administrator, this is Halna Gowen. Halna, this is Riz Tonith; he's the administrator of the skyhook." Tonith looked down on Halna with interest. "Halna Gowen? The heir of GPA?" he asked. "That's me." Halna said. "Nice to meet you Halna. This is my eldest son, Pors, and I believe you know Proddo. So, let's head downside and discuss the shipment." "By all means administrator." Bonteri said. Halna, Bonteri and the Muuns made their way to the lifts, the Iotrans following closely. They took two lifts; one for the Muuns and their guests; the other for the guards. The two lifts then started up and made their way downside. Halna heard about Muunilinst's clean skies and oceans, but was unprepared when he experienced it's beauty for the first time. Halna's parents had been to the planet multiple times before; business and politics demanded it. Halna would ask them about the planet each time, and he was awed with stories of big, sleek buildings and crystal clear oceans. His eyes were wide open the whole elevator ride, and the whole speeder ride across the ocean to their private mansion on a series of small, tropical islands. The mansion was nothing short of magnificent; a series of ornate buildings built into the mountain, connected to one another through hallways decorated with exotic flowers and marble pillars lined with pure aurodium. Surrounding the mansion were several smaller buildings of similar architecture, which served as guest houses, and a barracks for the Iotran guards. On one of the outer islands, was a runway with a fleet of airspeeders from many parts of the galaxy. Proddo ran up to Riz as he and Bonteri were talking. "Father, can Halna sleep in my room?" he asked. "No; Halna is a guest, and therefore, he and Captain Bonteri will be staying there until their business is complete." Riz answered, then turned to his elder son, "Pors, would you show Halna to his suite? Captain Bonteri and I have to discuss the shipment." "Yes father." Pors answered with respect in his voice, and turned to Halna. "Come with me Mr. Gowen." The Muun led the young Human out of the mansion, down a stone brick walkway that went through the foliage. The leaves of the palm trees on the sides swayed slightly in the warm wind, and the jungle was alive with various alien sounds. "What's that?" Halna asked, referring to the clicking sound. Pors answered, "That's a tree-scaler. We imported from Felucia. Anyway, here's where you and Captain Bonteri will be staying." The Muun indicated a beach-side residence; a building not unlike the others, with two floors and a balcony above the dining hall. "You'll be staying in the downstairs suite." Pors said, "It has a bedroom, a restroom designed for human use and a holo-device. You can use it to summon servant droids if you have an issue, want to order some food, or browse the local Holonet. However, if you want to make off-world transmissions, you'll have to go to the comm-tower, which is a few meters down the beach." With that, Pors walked away, leaving Halna to his own devices. Halna walked inside the building, into a lounge with green velvet-lined couches and poofs, a dark wood, round table with a holoprojector in the center, various shelves with flimsi-plast books and local flowers, a dejarik table and a large, curved window with a panoramic view of the beach. A portiere on the left wall to the door lead to a dining room and a kitchen, and a door straight in front lead to the first floor suite. Halna opened the door and found a large bed with velvet green blankets, an armchair, two bed-side desks, and a computer terminal. Halna used the terminal to order some Bantha milk, and five minutes later, an expensive, golden E-3PO protocol droid rang the door. When Halna answered it, it spoke in a prim, synthetic female voice, "Here is your beverage Master Gowen. May I be of further assistance?" "No thanks." Halna responded. Without another word, the droid left, heading back to the mansion. Sitting down on a poof, Halna activated the dejarik table and began a game against the computer.

The Next Day

Bonteri and Riz were supervising the transfer of spice from the Amanoa to various freighters, shuttles and several Alderaanian medical corvettes, fulfilling orders left and right, and checking manifestos, all from the mansion. Meanwhile outside, Halna and Proddo were using a pair of electrobinoculars to zoom in on the skyhook, which floated in the sky like a moon. They were trying to identify the ship models that were coming in to pick up the spice; they spotted CR-90 Corvettes, YT-1300 light freighters, VCX-100 freighters, GR-75 Transports, a few Commerce Guild ships and even a Mon Calamari cruiser. While they were discussing a particularly suspicious manifesto from a Star Yacht, an attendant droid came in, "Master Tonith, we're receiving a live transmission from Hego Damask." Bonteri looked confused "The reclusive former head of Damask Holdings?" Riz looked equally confused, "Must be. Record the transmission and summon Pors, Proddo and Halna." he said to the droid. "Already recording." it responded, and it walked away.

"No, that's an MC-80; you can tell by the ventral bridge pod." Halna said. "MC-80s don't have those," Proddo responded, "That's an MC-75." "Excuse me young masters." a synthetic voice said. Both kids looked at a silver-plated protocol droid, who said to Proddo, "Your father would like to see you both in the transmission tower." They then handed the binoculars to the droid and hurried off. The transmission tower looked like the other buildings; ornate and circular, except for a large array of antennae on the top. The kids walked in to a darkened room, with a holoprojector inside. Bonteri, Riz, Pors and several other Muuns were standing around it. As soon as the door closed, the holoprojector displayed an elder Muun wearing a breathing device. The Muun spoke in a rattling, slightly mechanical voice, slightly muffled by the hologram, "As many of you may have heard, the Trade Federation has blockaded and invade Naboo, in defiance of the taxation of the Free Trade Zones. Viceroy Gunray and his constituents will be arrested. (1) Pay heed to the way the Republic and the Jedi Order deal with them; The Federation will be dismantled, and the precedent will be set. Unless you take steps to begin a slow, carefully planned withdrawal from the Senate, taking your home and client worlds with you, you too, risk becoming property of the the Republic." The hologram then faded, and lights came on. As the Muuns and Captain Bonteri broke into discussion, Halna contemplated what Hego Damask said, and found himself hating the Republic and the idolized Jedi.

(1) Luceno, James. (2011). Darth Plagueis: New York: Del Rey
Memoirs of a Separatist 1: Calm Before the Storm
This is the first chapter of my Star Wars OC's bio. Hope you like it, because there's more coming.
Commission7 by HeartCores

Original: Commission7

This is my Star Wars The Clone Wars OC, Admiral Halna Gowen of the CIS. He's not a dark acolyte, but a tactical commander. (Please note, a lot of Halna's military operations during the clone wars were specific battles with no real idea who commanded the separatist forces, such as the Battle of Sarrish)

Basic Info:
  • Name: Halna Gowen (Name made using George Lucas's Star Wars Name Formula:…)
  • Age:
    • 20 (22 bby)
    • 23 (19 bby)
    • 47 (5 aby)
  • Species: Human
  • Sex: Male
  • Homeworld: Celanon
  • Allegiance:
    • Confederacy of Independent Systems (Clone Wars)
    • Toonbuck Toora's Separatist Holdout (Empire Era)
    • Marlo The Hutt (Empire Era)
    • Rebel Alliance/New Republic (Empire Era)
Physical Info:

  • Height: 1.87 m
  • Weight: 72.5 kg
  • Build: Tall and Slender
  • Face:
    • Short Goatee (Post Battle of Yavin)
  • Hair:
    • Texture: Wavy
    • Length: Medium
    • Color: Brown
  • Eyes:
    • Shape: Wideset
    • Size: Normal
    • Color: Brown
  • Special Features:
    • Left Arm severed by lightsaber during the Clone Wars, replaced by a B2 Battle Droid Arm
  • Force Sensitive?: No
Personal Info:

  • Social Status: Upper Class
  • Family: Parents: Argo and Callista Gowen, wealthy dignitaries of Celanon and owners of GPA; Callista represented the world first in the Republic Senate, then in the Confederate Parliament, while Argo ran the company. No siblings.
  • Education:
    • Private Schools
    • Celanon University
    • CIS Officer Academy on Geonosis
  • Close Friends:
    • Commander Havok (Personal Super Tactical Droid)
    • Captain Mar Tuuk
    • Colonel Jarik (Neimoidian Tactician)
    • Commodore Proddo (Muun Officer)
    • General Sev’rance Tann
  • Enemies:
    • Captain Orson Krennic
  • Allies:
    • Count Dooku
    • General Grievous
    • Asajj Ventress
    • Toonbuck Toora
  • Habits:
    • Tucking hair behind ear
    • Running fingers through hair
    • Licking Lips
    • Eye-rolling
    • Swearing
    • Gesturing a lot when issuing tactical commands
    • Saying things that don't make sense to anyone, even himself
    • Having trouble sleeping
    • Practicing his skills with his stun baton
  • Hobbies:
    • Tinkering with droid parts
    • Running tactical simulations
    • Going on spacewalks
    • Shooting asteroids
  • Likes:
    • Commanding a fleet
    • Working on machinery
    • Working with droids
    • Fighting for the Confederacy
  • Dislikes:
    • Having to deal with stupid battle droids
    • The Jedi for severing his arm
    • The Republic for it’s corrupt practices
    • Putting up with malfunctioning and/or arrogant tactical droid captains
    • Participating in the subjugation and slavery of innocent Republic citizens
  • Goals:
    • To make the Republic recognize the CIS as a legitimate government
    • To become one of the best CIS officers in the navy
    • To take down the Empire and avenge the CIS by joining the Rebel Alliance
      • To get revenge on Orson Krennic
Military Info:

  • Ranks:
    • Captain (22 BBY)
    • Colonel (21 BBY)
    • Admiral (20-19 BBY)
  • Personal Flagship: Lucrehulk-Class Battleship Dauntless
    • Year Received: 20 BBY
  • Weapons:
    • Heavy Blaster Pistol
    • B2 Droid Arm Blaster
    • Side Handle Stun-Tipped Truncheon (for fighting Jedi)
    • Thermal Imploders
  • Digital Gear:
    • Holographic Eyepiece with Ear Comlink (Displays environment and tactical information)
    • Touch Screen Wrist pad (Guides battle droids)History

  1. Early Life: Halna Gowen was born in 42 BBY to Argo and Callista Gowen. They were members of a wealthy Celanon family, and founders of Gowen Planetary Advancement, a subcompany of the Trade Federation that introduced less advanced planets to the greater galaxy, provided them with advanced technology and taught them how to use and market their resources, provided relief efforts to any society that was in danger of an apocalyptic event, and protected them from pirates. Halna grew up in Celanon City, and when he was 6 years old, he and his parents took frequent trips off-world with his parents, during which he learned about dozens of different cultures and the practice of mercantilism. When he was 10 years old, the Galactic Senate put a tax on the free trade zones, sectors where GPA and other companies thrive, and their star systems were protected from pirates by the trade federation's army; if the free-trade zones were taxed, then the droid army would be unable to protect against pirates. Halna’s parents were against the taxation of the FTZ, as it threatened the company and it’s client worlds. This event began Halna Gowen’s mistrust for the Republic. On 26 BBY, Halna was accepted into Celanon University, learning business and cruiser systems so that he can become a freighter captain in GPA’s fleet of Lucrehulks. On 24 BBY, The Confederacy of Independent Systems was founded by former Jedi Count Dooku of Serenno, and Celanon was one of the first worlds to join. The CIS was preparing a droid army with the help of the Trade Federation, Techno Union, Corporate Alliance, and other corporations, and it was recruiting officers to command the droid forces in the CIS Officer Academy on Geonosis, headed by Sev’rance Tann. Halna persuaded his parents to let him join the academy, though they were reluctant about their son going to war. He began his training for the war on 24 BBY. He learned tactical formations, how to command battle droids, fly star fighters just like the other recruits. Though he also took up combat training, which most of the other students avoided. Halna learned directly from Tann herself in this class, and was complimented for his skills with a side handle stun baton.
  2. The Clone Wars
    1. The Battle of Geonosis: When the Clone Army attacked Geonosis on 22 BBY, Halna was stationed at a tactical booth, from which he commanded dozens of platoons, and a squad of Hailfire Droids, one of which he directly drove into battle via remote control, taking out one of the Republic’s SPHA Walkers, and saving a Lucrehulk Core ship from destruction. For this, he was awarded with the rank of Captain, and given command of a Munificent-Class Frigate, which he christened Hypernova.
    2. The Battle of Christophsis/The Hutt Incident: Halna was assigned to Admiral Trench’s fleet, which was tasked with invading the world of Christophsis. His task was to destroy the local starfighter corps that made up the planet's orbital defense and make way for Gen. Whorm Loathsom's surface attack. Their Z-95s proved to be no match for Halna's vulture droids, and the Christophsis space force was destroyed. He then participated in the blockade of the planet, and Loathsom's landing craft arrived on schedule. He later rescued Trench from his doomed flagship during the Republic’s attack on the blockade to provide relief aid to Senator Organa. After his escape, he was assigned to aid Asajj Ventress on Teth. He commanded the Hypernova and several squads of droid fighters in an aerial battle with the Venator-Class Star Destroyer Resolute.
    3. The Ryloth Campaign: After the failed attempt to turn Jabba the Hutt against the Jedi, Halna was assigned to the space force that would attack the planet Ryloth. Halna’s mission was destroy a small group of republic ships en route to providing reinforcements to the fleet over Ryloth, while the main force engaged the Republic. He was provided with 2 additional frigates, and he surprised the three cruisers before they could jump to Hyperspace, and incapacitated the escorts, while losing one of his frigates. But the republic starfighters were moving with droid-like efficiency. After a brief skirmish where Halna’s own use of tactical skill and increased number of vulture droids, he was hailed by the lead republic ship. The commander of these reinforcements was not a Jedi, but a Judicial Forces captain named Orson Krennic. After a brief compliment of each other's abilities, Orson Krennic offered to surrender. Halna prepared a boarding party and rode a droch-class boarding ship right to the star destroyer’s bridge. Hana moved his forces into the bridge and had guns trained on all of the officers. But then, Halna was surprise attacked by a Weequay Jedi named Tormax. He ordered the droids to fire on the clone technicians, and engage the clones on their way to the bridge. After a brief confrontation, during which Krennic managed to escape in a shuttle, Tormax cut Halna’s left arm off. Before the Jedi could deliver a blow, Halna suddenly whipped out his blaster and fired before the young Jedi could block it; Tormax was only recently made a Jedi Knight, and was too caught up in the moment of victory, letting his guard down. Right after Tormax died, Halna grabbed Tormax’s lightsaber, and lost consciousness. He was carried off by B2 battle droids and returned to the Hypernova. Halna later woke up in the Hypernova’s custom medical bay, where a mechanical device pumping bacta was attached to where his left arm was. He found the lightsaber he took from Tormax on the bedside table to his right, and General Grievous standing at the foot of his bed. He was at first scared of the General, he had killed dozens of Jedi before, and showed little mercy to his followers. But Grievous congratulated him for taking down a Jedi, stating that it was an enormous feat for a captain, and promoted Halna to Colonel, and giving him control of the Recusant-Class Destroyer Harbinger, as well as two additional frigates, his own squad of commando droids, and assigned him to his personal fleet. Halna gave Grievous the lightsaber and underwent a surgery which would give him a slightly modified B2 Battle Droid Arm, complete with a tactical wrist pad and blaster gauntlet. When Ryloth was secure, he and Asajj Ventress went to the neutral moon where Jedi Master Yoda and King Katuunko of Toydaria were to meet for a secret negotiation to establish a Republic base on Toydaria. He commanded the Hypernova and another frigate in a surprise attack on Yoda’s consular ship. During the Republic's counter-invasion of Ryloth, Halna provided Captain Mar Tuuk with 4 frigates to beat back General Skywalker's fleet.
    4. The Malevolence in Danger: The Malevolence was attacking a Republic medical station near Naboo when it was seriously damaged by General Skywalker and his squad of prototype Y-wing bombers. General Grievous put out a distress call, and Halna’s flight was the first to receive the signal. He met a Republic cruiser group under the command of Jedi General Luminara Unduli. His flight was outmatched, and he was forced to retreat. He intercepted Grievous’s star fighter, and learned of the Malevolence’s demise.
    5. First Battle of Felucia: In 21 BBY, General Grievous sent Halna to Felucia, the location of a clone medical base. His objective was to destroy the station and leave no survivors. He was provided with an ion bomb. Before he launched his attack, Halna sent a probe droid ahead to investigate. It showed 5 star destroyers and a Tector-Class Dreadnaught, as well as two Arquitens-Class Light Cruisers. Before the clones could discover the probe, he had it self-destruct. Halna then plotted a very precise course from the staging ground above Korriban. The Harbinger and 6 frigates appeared alarmingly close to the star destroyers, and opened fire before alarms could sound. Before the jump, Halna installed the ion bomb to a droid tri-fighter, removed it's droid brain, and connected the fighter's controls wirelessly to his command chair on the Harbinger; from his chair, he would guide the fighter on a suicide course right to the medical station. There may have been more confederate forces, but the Republic ships had greater shields. Halna ordered each frigate to engage a Republic ship, while he ordered the pilots of the Harbinger to bring the ship as close to the station as they could. He then launched the tri-fighter, and had 5 other droid fighters escort them, to conceal the intention of the rigged droid. He was about to make it past the dreadnought when droid staff reported an enemy boarding party. He ordered one of his commando droids to resume piloting the rigged droid fighter, while he and his other commandos went to the broken airlock. Drawing his blaster, Halna went into battle; he picked off 2 clones with his pistol, and then 2 droid poppers zipped by him. Most of the B1s were fried, but his commandos managed to survive. Halna then severed the light cruiser from the Harbinger with a thermal imploder. Just after the cruiser floated away, the power went out. He received a report from the commando on the bridge, a squad of clone commandos made it to the bridge. He rushed up there with his commandos in tow, ordering them to make their way to the console controlling the suicide tri-fighter and complete it's course. When they arrived, Halna saw the squad leader draw a vibrosword. Halna then drew his truncheon, activated it and attacked. As he and the clone were sparring, the commando droids engaged the others. One made it to the console and took control of the suicide fighter; it was following the tri-fighter escorts near one of the star destroyers; after control was lost, the fighter followed 3 other tri-fighters, which immediately joined the battle. The commando redirected it to it's original target. On approach, the other tri-fighters pulled away as the suicide fighter slammed the station's reactor; an ionized explosion ensued, and the station lost all power. While Halna engaged the clones on board the Harbinger, the other frigates were winning against the star destroyers; the second light cruiser was destroyed, and the 5 venators were on flames from the strafing runs of hyena bombers. Meanwhile, the tector-class was attempting to flee; Halna had 3 heavily damaged frigates, so he ordered one of them to ram the dreadnought. He also ordered the droid starfighters to engage any ships or escape pods attempting to flee the battle. The frigate was severely damaged by the dreadnought's turbolasers, but it remained intact as the 2 ships collided. Several nu-class shuttles, clone starfighters and y-wings were attempting to flee; he moved the Harbinger and the remaining frigates to intercept; no Republic ships survived. After a brief cleanup of escape pods, he ordered the Harbinger's landing craft to locate any clones that made it on the surface. The clones were found and killed, but they discovered a non-clone commander; a young commodore named Cassio Tagge. Suspecting he would have a wealth of information, he ordered the droids to take him prisoner. Before leaving, Halna dropped a Vulture Droid Deployment Station, to destroy any Republic ships that came to investigate. He returned to Korriban to meet General Grievous, who was en route. Halna delivered his report and Tagge, who would be scheduled for transfer to Lola Sayu. While on transit to the blockade over Saleucami, he received a transmission from the Confederate Council; word spread about his efficient work, and he was promoted to Commodore.
    6. The Battle of Sarrish: In 20 BBY, Halna, who became a Commodore after his success at destroying a Republic fleet over Felucia, and his fellow Commodore Proddo, as well as a Neimoidian Colonel named Jarik, were assigned to the Confederate base on Sarrish. The 212th clone legion, led by General Obi-wan Kenobi had arrived in orbit and were flying in gunships to the base. The officers devised a plan; while Proddo stayed at the main base with most of their forces, Halna had over 20 droid gunships, fully loaded with B2 Battle droids, hidden 2 kilometers to the south of the base, and Jarik commanded the fleet which would trap the Republic space forces. He completely deactivated his droids so the clones wouldn’t detect them. When Kenobi seemed on the verge of victory, Halna and Jarik attacked; He and his commando droids rode on the hulls of their gunships, which routed the 212th legion, and dealt them serious casualties. Meanwhile, Jarik had already destroyed half a dozen light cruisers and severely incapacitated the command ship. After the initial onslaught from the gunships, they deployed their battle droids, and Halna and his commandos led the final assault on the surviving clones. Kenobi and several clones may have escaped, but the battle was won, and both Halna and Proddo were promoted to Admirals; Jarik was promoted to Rear Admiral and was assigned to Halna's fleet. While both Proddo and Jarik chose providence-class ships for their flagships, Halna chose a Lucrehulk-Class Battleship, which he named Dauntless. Halna and Proddo became famous among the ranks of Confederate Officers, and both of their fleets frequently accompanied General Grievous. Halna was also given a Super Tactical Droid, which he named Havok, and a Rogue-Class Starfighter. He used Havok to command the Dauntless and the rest of his squadron while he was in his starfighter. As a promotion gift, Argo Gowen used the family fortune to buy Halna a cloaking device, which he installed onto the Dauntless.
    7. The Battle over Coruscant: When General Grievous’s fleet attacked Coruscant, Halna led a bomber strike on the Republic Cruisers docked on the surface. His squads were intercepted by republic star fighters, and a massive aerial battle broke out on the surface of Coruscant, causing a lot of property damage. During the skirmish over the docking facilities, Grievous successfully kidnapped Chancellor Palpatine, and ordered all remaining forces to withdraw from the surface. When Halna returned to the Dauntless, a fleet of Republic star destroyers 1 hundred strong came out of hyperspace to intercept the fleet. Halna picked up several escape pods from Grievous’s doomed flagship, the Invisible Hand. The escape pods carried Grievous and several of his organic crew. Grievous brought news of Count Dooku’s death at the hands of General Skywalker. From the Dauntless, Grievous marshaled the rest of the Confederate fleet to retreat; the attack had failed.
    8. The End of The Clone Wars: Halna was engaged with a republic fleet in deep space, being chased in his starfighter by a Jedi interceptor and several clone headhunters, when the headhunters suddenly fired on the Jedi, and destroyed his ship. He was confused, but he quickly ended the battle; without their Jedi commander, the clones were helpless. He then received a transmission from Mustafar, where the Confederate Council was stationed; the war is over, shutdown your fleet immediately. Halna immediately assumed this was a trick, and logged on to the Holonet. He found out that the Republic had seen a Jedi rebellion, and was reorganizing into an empire. Fearing the worst, he traveled alone to Mustafar, and found the Confederate leading council dead. Using an astromech droid, he extracted visual footage, and found out that Anakin Skywalker had killed Nute Gunray and the others. He also found out from a recorded transmission from Utapau to Mustafar that General Grievous had been killed shortly before the clones turned on the Jedi. He then realized the worst; his fleet was probably the only one left. The Confederate Navy was once tens of thousands strong in spacecraft; Now, it was just under 4,000 vessels, and less than a hundred thousand active battle droids. Halna Gowen had now become the leader of the Separatist Holdouts.
  3. The Empire Era:
    1. Sy Myrth: Halna found Proddo, as well as Admiral Tuuk and General Whorm Loathsom, who escaped the prison on Coruscant during the attempted kidnapping of the chancellor. They found sanctuary for the fleet with Toonbuck Toora of Sy Myrth. He contacted his parents in person to let them know in secret what he was up to, and he told them to try and use GPA to protect their client worlds from the Empire’s military wrath by means of total compliance. Halna and the others then offered to aid Senator Toora in her struggle against the Empire. During the empire’s first engagement against Toora’s holdout, Halna met an old enemy, now Lieutenant Commander Orson Krennic. After a year of resistance, Halna and Toonbuck were defeated; Jarik was killed on his cruiser, and Toora and Loathsom were apprehended by the Empire, but Halna and Proddo managed to escape to Hutt Space with only Havok, The Dauntless, 5 destroyers and 10 frigates, as well as a few hundred droid interceptors, bombers and fighters. Proddo left the army and returned to Muunilinst to stay with his family, and Halna took the remains of his forces to the outer rim.
    2. Alliance With Marlo The Hutt/Hiding: Halna Gowen was employed as a smuggler by Marlo the Hutt, because the Dauntless had a cloaking device. He hid his other ships in an uncharted star system in the middle of the Rishi Maze, deactivated them, and memorized the hyperspace coordinates; only he knew where his ships were. He used his remaining droids and shuttles from the Dauntless to make lucrative profits, dealing in spices and illegal weapons. He always operated the Dauntless in Hutt Space; because of his deal with Marlo, he could remain safe from imperial Star Destroyers. He also had contacts in the Rebel Alliance; while he believed that the rebels were doomed to fail, even if he decided to lend his cruisers to the cause, he continued to supply them with weapons and droids. In 4-3 BBY, Halna found the droid general Kalani, who recently escaped from Agamar with the help of a rebel cell. Kalani decided to accompany Halna and Havok.
    3. Joining the Rebel Alliance: (Update: After seeing Rogue One, I decided to edit the circumstances in which Halna Gowen joins the Rebels. There are spoilers ahead; you have been warned...) 19 years after Halna went into hiding, he heard rumors of a planet-killer circulating through the outer rim; an Imperial battle platform capable of destroying planets. He knew that a similar battle station was being planned by the CIS before Geonosis was retaken by the Republic. He reached his rebel contacts and learned of Jedha City's destruction at the hands of the Death Star, and that a group of rebel spies under the call sign Rogue One had left the rebel HQ on Yavin 4 for Scarif, the location of the Imperial Security Complex Citadel, followed by Admiral Raddus and his fleet. Halna went back into the Rishi Maze and reactivated his fleet, then jumped ship to Scarif. Halna ordered the frigates to ram the oncoming imperial forces while he ordered Kalani to command the destroyers as they provided cover for the escaping rebel fleet. He contacted Raddus, who told him to save the rest of the fleet, but not come for him. The recusants, including Kalani's ship, were destroyed by Darth Vader's ship as Halna and Havok loaded several starfighters and transports onto the Dauntless. Before the hyperspace jump, Halna saw a CR-90 Corvette break away from Raddus's ship and jump to hyperspace. Halna and the rebel ships returned to Yavin 4. The alliance council members who lost confidence in the rebellion returned, and the alliance prepared for the possibility of the Death Star coming to Yavin. Halna became an official member, and was tasked with leading the rebel fleet away from Yavin should the Death Star succeed. *end spoiler* A day after that first battle, word spread about the Death Star across the galaxy; it had destroyed Alderaan. Fortunately, Princess Leia returned to Yavin with the Death Star plans, in an old Corellian freighter with some ne'er-do-wells from the outer rim. The Death Star then arrived at Yavin; the Millennium Falcon was tracked. Red Squadron and Gold Squadron led a successful attack; the Death Star was destroyed. After that pivotal battle, Halna aided in various missions for the alliance. When the empire was finally defeated, Halna returned to Celanon, and became a captain in the GPA fleet. He spent the rest of his career doing what his parents originally wanted him to do.
Halna Gowen
This is my attempt at a star wars OC; a commander in the Separatist droid army, because the Separatists need more love.

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SlingBlade87 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016
Thank you for the watch, I hope you'll enjoy my material.
NPlaysMC Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016
You're welcome. I made a Separatist OC of my own too, and I thought I would share it. Do you want to check it out?…
SlingBlade87 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016
Am I critiquing this character or just looking them over?
NPlaysMC Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016
I don't have core, so I can't request critiques, and I don't have the money to become core. So you can just look him over.

BTW, I created this character before I found out about your OC Sarka Bossanyi (One of my faves), so I didn't take anything from him.
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